9/12/24

 Today we continued with the second and third steps in the writing process. We also took notes on informal and formal language to help us with the third step in the writing process, revising. I learned that it is important to revise. I saw many things in my paragraphs that needed revising. So I plan to revise all essays I write. 

I'm really tired today. I had a late night because my parents wanted me to go with them to a concert. I enjoyed it but got to bed later than I wanted. I really wish I had an extra day to finish my school and homework, but it's due tomorrow so I must finish it tonight.   

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